A salty breeze
White sand, both soft and coarse
Sea shells dot the coast, all manner of fantastic shapes
Waves, so gentle, in all shades of blue, green, violet
The sun warming you, light washing away all worries, bathing all in peaceful radience
Author notes
A quickie distraction for Rianna Bear. Hope you like it, hope you feel better, and happy almost birthday.
A contest entry
- ♦QUICKIE♦FEELING SICK...and needing some distraction!!!! by Rianna Bear.
450 points, ended May 6, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like your poem I have never been to the beach.
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wow. this is really good =]
great write
it paints an amazing picture =]
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lol It was very good hun I liked it adn was very nice to imagine yay ur soo amazing hehehe =)
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lovely. please buy me a ticket to wherever this is!!!
this is a fine distraction. i saw it in my head and almost tried to pick up one of those shells...almost 
thankya
*R
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