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Eating Out Part 2

Sean and I were talking,
When Mrs. Miller cut in.
"Some people need to be chewed out."
I agreed that they did.
Wondering if she knew who I was referring to.
Then Sean looked at me and said,
"It was chewing out not eating out."
My face turned read and I laughed so hard,
"I new that." I said to him.
As Mrs.Miller walked behind us,
Not saying a word.
Eating out again,
Instead of me,
It came from a friend.

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  • Sharon Lynn
    October 30
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    LMAO How cool. I love the way you played on words. I need to go read Part I. Good luck in this contest.
    Sharon


  • Avarus L. Katier
    October 23
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    lol i like it short but funny nice write i loved it


  • foreheadofgod
    October 7

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    god thats pretty great ...this one and the first eating out is the first stuff ive read of yours so far and they make me really happy on the inside of ma brain...i feel all gooey and dirty and horny or hungry for pizza.


  • Leanna-bean
    September 17
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    lol I think this may be funnier then part one!


  • Mr.
    September 16
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    ooh funny.


  • redhanded
    September 6
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    hahaha this is a hillarious piece! I loved it so much! *
    andi
    (redhanded)


  • Names Tay
    September 2
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    definately fit for the contest! haha. Great write! Good luck

    ~~Tay.


  • Rick Weston silver member
    August 5
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    cleverly written, but i'm hungry for some reason now.


  • Antebellum
    August 3

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    Not saying a word.
    Eating out again,
    Instead of me,
    It came from a friend.


    Lol. nice. poor teacher.
    thanks for entering.
    goodluck


  • livingItup
    June 25
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    lmao wow this was funny. the first part too. i love it!


  • kooleyes
    February 14

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    Kool I like the way you wrote this piece.
    Not saying a word.
    Eating out again,
    Very tastefully done
    Thanks for the read and keep on writing


  • WTF-Hatchwork silver member
    August 9, 2008
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    HMMMMMMMMMMM.......


  • Rovingone gold member
    June 28, 2008
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    Wow, I bet that put the stain in Mrs. Millers cheeks. This was really funny.


  • whits end silver member
    May 26, 2008
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    Haaaa! This is very humorous!

  • aww this is so frekin funny I luv it and its awsome I like it yupperz welp better go but remember that luv u..

  • It hurts

    As I am sitting here eating my pizza I was reading this I took a sip of Pepsi and it went up my nose. Dam you Sheila...lol My stomach hurts from laughing so hard. Your great.

    • lesbian-in-love
      May 7, 2008
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      Well sorry about that. I am glad you got a laugh. The best part is the teacher didn't say a word. I just slapped him. It was great.

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