Sean and I were talking,
When Mrs. Miller cut in.
"Some people need to be chewed out."
I agreed that they did.
Wondering if she knew who I was referring to.
Then Sean looked at me and said,
"It was chewing out not eating out."
My face turned read and I laughed so hard,
"I new that." I said to him.
As Mrs.Miller walked behind us,
Not saying a word.
Eating out again,
Instead of me,
It came from a friend.
When Mrs. Miller cut in.
"Some people need to be chewed out."
I agreed that they did.
Wondering if she knew who I was referring to.
Then Sean looked at me and said,
"It was chewing out not eating out."
My face turned read and I laughed so hard,
"I new that." I said to him.
As Mrs.Miller walked behind us,
Not saying a word.
Eating out again,
Instead of me,
It came from a friend.
A contest entry
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Comments
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LMAO How cool. I love the way you played on words. I need to go read Part I. Good luck in this contest.
Sharon
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lol i like it short but funny nice write i loved it


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god thats pretty great
...this one and the first eating out is the first stuff ive read of yours so far and they make me really happy on the inside of ma brain...i feel all gooey and dirty and horny or hungry for pizza.


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lol I think this may be funnier then part one!
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ooh funny.


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hahaha this is a hillarious piece! I loved it so much!
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andi
(redhanded)

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definately fit for the contest! haha. Great write! Good luck 
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cleverly written, but i'm hungry for some reason now.
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Not saying a word.
Eating out again,
Instead of me,
It came from a friend.
Lol. nice. poor teacher.
thanks for entering.
goodluck
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lmao wow this was funny. the first part too. i love it!


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Kool I like the way you wrote this piece.
Not saying a word.
Eating out again,
Very tastefully done
Thanks for the read and keep on writing -
HMMMMMMMMMMM.......


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Hmmmm is that all u can say?
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Wow, I bet that put the stain in Mrs. Millers cheeks. This was really funny.


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I don't know if she heard it but yuck she ain't that good looking LMAO!
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Haaaa! This is very humorous!


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aww this is so frekin funny I luv it and its awsome I like it yupperz welp better go but remember that luv u..


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It hurts
As I am sitting here eating my pizza I was reading this I took a sip of Pepsi and it went up my nose. Dam you Sheila...lol My stomach hurts from laughing so hard. Your great.

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Well sorry about that. I am glad you got a laugh. The best part is the teacher didn't say a word. I just slapped him.
It was great.
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