Here on the floor
Everyone sits
As they draw pictures
Upon their wrists
Each picture is different
Drawn with a different knife
But each picture the same
Getting rid of the same troubles in our life
Each strike of the knife
Each detail of the picture
Helps a fountain appear
and with this fountain
our troubles disappear
Author notes
Written December 19th, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- *CuTtErS AnD SuICiDeS* by starryeyes17.
300 points, ended December 25, 2003, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i like it. the rhyming is nice and natural, i usually am veeeeery opposed to rhyming, but this i like. -
I like it. It’s a little short for my taste in reading. Not as powerful to catch my eye with it being short but it’s a good write non the less i enjoyed reading it -gina
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wow! short but has an awesome feeling in it! very enjoyable to read...wish there was more to read...hehe..great job hun! goodluck to youz and thanks a ton for entering!! merry christmas
always, lindsey* xox
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wow very vivid poem it was very descriptive. enjoyed reading and good luck in the contest
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