A broken girl, irrepairable
decided that maybe it wasn't so terrible to be dead
Her "family" wouldn't miss her
That she knew
It could've been more true
The lying father
The worthless mother, who would never pick her kids, over another
The sadistic scumbag who's ring she wore,
A brother dead can't care,
and her sister, that bitch was never there
It was so bluntly obvious that they didn't give a shit,
that the poor girl finally said: "I quit."
In the end,
she was convinced
that no one could love an ugly bitch, a whore,
who, in her mind, would never become anything more
She whispered this, winced, and placed the gun to her chest
At last, her tortured soul would be eternally put to rest
Inside her head,
the thought it spun
"I wonder, will people cry when my life is done?"
One last time, for a moment,
her tear-filled eyes beheld the beauty of the setting sun
Then finally she took a breath,
and fired the gun
I ask you,
Will one single tear fall,
because this sad, broken girl decided to end it all?
Would you give her an unmarked grave,
throwing her lifeless corpse in some cold, dank cave?
Could you even lower the coffin that held her body, stiff and dead
into the ground with a single loving word said?
That would be too much work wouldn't it?
If I could, I'd spit at you in disgust
WAS IT TOO FUCKING HARD TO BE SOMEONE THAT GIRL COULD TRUST?
Author notes
This is what happens when no one cares.
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i have been in the situlation
i really loved it
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ouch i can realy feel itthat was almost thoroughly painfulland the ryme=ing was great..i cant ryme without sounding like dr. sues
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This is awesome!!! WOW!!
I think you have captured the agony of many & printed it out as elegantly as any!! This is really cool! It's so sad & yet it makes me want to get out there & try harder to be there for people who need someone. It's humbling in a way. It flows very well & holds your attention as you read it, not that a mind could wander from this piece but you might want to rush on ahead, but can't because you are spell bound to follow word for word to the final end & then you must stop & let your thoughts catch up, process & settle. Excellent!!!
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Oh wow....I love it..
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awesome write britt....
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Great writing my dear,it held my attention
You are a better writer than you give yourself credit for
Keep at it and you will publish a book one day!!!!
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WOW!!!! Very astonishing write, sweet BOO...I want you to always remember that I am in your corner...I am here if you ever need someone to talk to, someone to trust....you know how to get in touch with me anytime you need me....
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