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Soon,

Tears will soon,
Indent my cheeks,
Just like a river,
Moulding dry land,

Blood will soon,
Stain my arms,
Just like a fire,
Leaving harsh burns,

Bruises will soon,
Cover my whole body,
Just like a wall,
Plastered with graffiti,

Nightmares will soon,
Come a reality,
Just like the night,
Taking over the day.

I was trying to put it all into words but i didnt quite manage...

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  • ucancallmereal
    May 6, 2008

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    omygosh that was such a good poem!! wow.. wow.. is this how you really feel? im sorry <333
    but it was so good and the imagery was stunning! i really felt like it was taking over me in a weird way. oh and i tried to pick a favorite part but it was impossible hehe. i just totally love your poems!!!!!!!!!