The friend in me today
seeks the friend in you.
I need your essence;
your positive attitude.
You walk with fine nobility
just what I need in humility
dance with me as I sing our song
the friendship dance is rather strong.
Enticing is the angled path we stroll
among the garden's bright lit abode.
How often do I roam your face,
and relax in our friendship's grace.
Author notes
Just free flow form I think hahaha don't quote me though lol
A contest entry
- I Think I'm Back Now by pattyann4500.
1000 points, ended May 20, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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"How often do I roam your face,
and relax in our friendship's grace."
I adore this line!! Your poem has wonderful energy, and I do like the delightful rhyme in the second stanza. I would be great had you used this throughout the entire poem. Thank you so much for this cheerful piece. Patricia
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Thanks for your lovely review
lol
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Wonderful!
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Thanks PerV, happy to see youlol
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I liked this made me feel warm and happy Great work as usual
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thanks
as usual?
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i need you dear friend , you entice friendship xxx
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really? hahaha okay.
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the friendship dance - the music is playing, the rhythm is saying, let's dance along the lanes of humanity
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ahh, mi amigo, how you flutter laughter.
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