all guys want is some love,
you know, from the girl the day dream of.
hug them once, then again,
let them know you want to be more than friends.
kiss him once, kiss him twice,
they rather have naughty then nice.
girls want guys who write poems and roses, too,
guys want girls with lots of love and a few tattoos.
so ask him today,
my love, do you want me to stay?
hug and kiss him all over again,
stay with him, be his friend!
Author notes
i hope you all like it.
A contest entry
- Romance... (ladies only!!) by Angelflower.
1500 points, ended July 30, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think? be honest. constructive critsism is all good.
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aww this is really sweet you did a wonderful job.. thank you very much for sharing this.. It was really loving and very soft.. I really enjoyed reading this...best of luck..
Angel
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Loved it well penned.
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very nicely done. Guys are not that different they just have to ACT macho sometimes.
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kiss him once, kiss him twice,
they rather have naughty then nice.
girls want guys who write poems and roses, too,
guys want girls with lots of love and a few tattoos.
sensual i love this the rhyme is great too -
yea wow .. this is awesome and i love it deffenately a fan and an interesting way ov lookin at it awesome job babez ! =
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awww so sweet
this has great meaning
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Nice recovery on the background...nice!
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Cute write...shows some sense even..All the best in the contest!
If you could use another background that will be great as this is making your poem a little hard to read...
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Very nice, difficult to read though because of the background you chose. Sorry, just want to help.
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