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Tanka of the Trees

Trees sway by moonlight
branches groan with each new breeze
moaning in sorrow
through the air their sadness drifts
as if reliving old pains

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A contest entry

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  • GreySquirrel
    May 13, 2008
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    Fantastic!

    I could hear the trees, wonderful imagery.


  • crazymomma
    May 7, 2008
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    Nice imagery here. Good luck in the contest.


  • Samplette gold member
    May 6, 2008

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    Fantastic tanka!! Love the graphic too! You have presented it very well. Excellent writing. Thank you for entering.
    Sam