This dream is forever shattered
Lost in the pool of sorrow
Thinking that you would be mine
Mine forever
Our first kiss
The touch of your hand
Will be deeply remembered
In my heart
As I remember the days
Of the warm nights of summer
How you would hold my hand
Forever, like there was no end
It was only you and me
I will remember and cherish those days
Of happiness
Even though I cry these tears of sorrow
I will always love you
Your name, carved in this cold stone
But you will never fade away
In my heart,
My mind,
My soul…
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300 points, ended May 7, 2008, 34 entries
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I....freakin .....LOVE THIS!!!! you know how much I love sad stuff! and this is about sad lost love,EVEN BETTER!
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Awesome
This is really good!!! I understand heartbreak, I just got out of it. Be strong and Leave it in the Hands of the Lord.
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Wow that was awesome.
I always love it when someone else writes something that is pretty much how I feel.
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this poem is so sad but i like sad poemes! very discriptive and true lots of good emotioms u used espesially this parts my fav:
This dream is forever shattered
Lost in the pool of sorrow
~~ksenia~~ -
Alas that which brings us the greatest pleasure also is the source of our most agonizing pain... The deep concaves carved by strong emotions can fill with the most wonderful rushes, but when empty leave the biggest holes... I hate to ramble on so, it's a wonderful poem... Nice job with it...
peace,
hypnorocker
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AWESOME!
*Splodes*
OMG I LOVE IT!
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nice
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Geez! That one was really good! It was sad, but very beautiful! Very well done Sweetheart! Keep up the good work! Talk to you/see you soon. Love you!
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