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Those who dare to dream (Tanka)

Those who dare to dream
will rise from the daily mist,
walk out of shadows
and whose song will long be heard
through expression of their choice.

A contest entry

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  • crazymomma
    May 7, 2008
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    I really love the message in this poem. Good luck in the contest.


  • Samplette gold member
    May 6, 2008

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    A nicely penned Tanka. The pivot line works well too. I think you did a great job. Thank you for entering.
    Sam