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Everyone smiles

Black dresses are worn
At a wedding
That feels more like a funeral

Our tears fall
Like the angels who willed this
And everyone smiles

So fake, so fake
And nothing feels real anymore
And everyone smiles

Is this pain supposed to float away
Like a feather
Just to be forgotten?

It won't go away
Even with the fake smiles
It won't go away

Black dresses are worn
At a wedding
that feels more like a funeral
And everyone smiles

Please tell me what you think

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  • maa gold member
    May 10, 2008

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    you have so much talent, my young friend, your way of bringing consciousness to society is amazing ... you don't just swallow what others accept without a second thought, but you use your discernment to determinate if it's beneficial or not ...

    keep on, courageous one, keep on ...

    maa