All We've Been Through
after all we've gone through
you still remain at my side
i love the way i feel
when you refuse to hide
you stand up for me
you listen to what i say
your eyes catiously watch me
as i take my final breath
you hold me tight
and pray i'm still alive
but what do you remember
when i was still at your side
with tears that touch your eyes
you bury me six feet under
when god possesses my soul
i'll remember
i'll remeber what
we've gone trough
the hardships we faced
these are all the things
that we have been through.
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Thanks for commenting on my poem! I like your poem too. What you are saying is powerful. Double check on your spelling though. I alway have to double check mine too...
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thanks
i just realized now that my pome had misspelt words i appreciate the comment
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