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I watched him die of a broken heart.

As my father in law lies in his grave
  and his exwife stands there
as her dearest friend is buried
  next to him under the tree

And as she drives home
  from this fateful scene
On the radio plays A whiskey Lullaby

  And she asks me
If God is trying to tell her something
  she doesn't get

Oh Lady can't you see
  he died of a broken heart
he cried for 20 years
 


  unable to see his children
you took his life away;
 
  He tried to fill it with money
the pain you inflicted on him
  Us women can move on
But he could not;
  he would sit on the staircase balling
trying to hide;
  20 years after you left him
turning his children against him;
  Yes he was a pain in the butt
but he had a big heart.
And I miss him dearly

The lies you spread hurt his soul
  I watched him in his last days
Oh how proud of his grandbaby

  But sad
very sad

  Lady
I watched my father in law die

  of a broken heart.

In memory Of Jack Neu  R.I.P.

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  • BehindTheShadow
    May 17, 2008

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    Very nice piece, so sad, yet as the old saying goes...better to have loved and lost, then to have never loved at all...

  • Jokerman
    May 7, 2008

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    brutally honest

    some great lines again;my favourite is the lies you spread....people can hurt each other so much.even without knowing it sometimes.you say it so well here.


  • SaviDropKick.Oi.
    May 6, 2008
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    great cwrite very well penned jsdfi