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Am I Really?


Squeeze me with your thighs
let me bite your soft spot,
and in this process you are mine.

Let me pull your hair in doggie style,
and push you down, so you may please me.
Doing this you become my lover of passion.

I want to rock you hard and fast,
so when the time comes we may feel it at last.
Your body belongs to me this time.

I shall have my way this once
because you and I both want it,
and of course I know to be gentle.

This moment of sweet ecstasy bliss
is ours for the taking, and you
shall be mine.....



Author notes

Sensual with a twist.

What do you think guys truly want...


I say this is what guys want. To be in control. Sure...once in a while I'll play along. *giggles & Grins*

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  • Angelflower
    July 30, 2008

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    This is really interesting...I like the way you think..Lol.. you really did a wonderful job.. The imagery was really vivid and the intensity was there as well.. thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck..

    Angel


  • Unconscious-Energy
    June 28, 2008
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    I am getting crossed signals with who is the girl and guy...sorry


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    June 12, 2008

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    whoa!!!! this is one very Hot poem my love.. excellent job with the prompt.. though I must say I am a bit jealous, hmm.. Time to step up and turn the heat up a bit eh? this is an excellent poem btw.. go get em...

    good luck my love

    k


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    Whoa... that was hot sis!! A little bit of dominating in there.. waheyyy... very well written!!!

    Erotica done brilliantly


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    May 6, 2008

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    ooh this is nice,
    dark BDSM sort of incontrol,
    most men want a girl in control,
    oooh and how i love the background,
    adds that spicy feel,
    best of luck in the contest,
    love Kitty xxx

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