the world; a mixed mess
conformity flying high
few seem to now care
how to get back order when
all hell is being let loose
Author notes
Tanka
A contest entry
- Tanka Time by Samplette.
600 points, ended May 13, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Overlook made up words
Comments
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Very creative. Good luck in the contest
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Thanks so much for your review
lol
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You've said such a lot
In so few words. What a thought-provoking Tanka - thank you for sharing it.
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Thanks so much for this fine reviewlol
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life is messy P but most of us fight through good luck xx
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For sure PP and I suppose for the most part we eventually get there
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Life sure is that way...none is bothered to make it better...it one for himself and run...
Beautiful tanka..all the best!
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thanks lol
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aye, a crazy world we live in, hell is blowing across the countries, though the ones in power keep saying all is well
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Yes, a difficult time indeed
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It has been a long time since I have written a tanka myself, or read one really. You did a nice job. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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Thanks for hostinglol
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