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Tree Lets Go

The tree lets go

In the Fall

To those it nourished

And who nourished it,

Kept it young.

It lets go.

And its babies tumble,

Most dying

All dying...

But most trees

Know letting go

Is all they can do

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about (s)tumbling

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    May 12, 2008
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    I love the jerkiness of flow here...like, almost letting go then grabbing back. Ty for entering.


  • parenchma
    May 8, 2008
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    You are a maid writing with wisdom of a lifetime...