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The War

the night is cold
the air is crisp
the stench
of rotting bodies
lingers;

the day has come
women and children crying
for the loss of their men
the king burnt
with the hate of his loss
a tradgedy true;

the noon
more lively than dusk
bodies being caried
to a pile
were they were burnt;

the night grim
the lonely
just began to linger
and the town
cried the war
it was here
it had come
and now its gone....

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