Weeds spin absent sea-soul,
traveling
desert,
freedom exhaling silence, crossing metaphor,
like asphalt cats
purring wishful urgency;
undiscovered excerpts,
grounding graduated grills
of metallic interference,
craving endless,
crushing occurrence,
lemming fingers
levitating lusty,
limber water,
regretting earth, as dusty daydream.
A contest entry
- Quicky Prompt - PIF - 40 words by CarolDesjarlais.
525 points, ended May 12, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wonderful use of language that is really evocative and compelling to the senses... your images are powerful.... a great poem.....wow, wow...
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such beautiful flow and language with such emotion and lovely alliteration .....Another great poem my dear friend
Lynda
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