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My Next (Previous) Life

I was "born" a Christian,
Raised a Protestant,
Been through a million sermons,
And I don't beleve in God.

And in my next life,

          I was born on the streets,
And both my parents beat me,
                  But while I was in jail,
            Jesus saved my soul.


Could we have had the same soul?

But the differing experiances at youth,

We ran from, for somthing else to hold?

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Promt: Religious people are afraid of going to hell
Spiritual people have already been there!

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  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    July 12, 2008

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    This is an interesting poem. It made me think. I do not believe in previous lives but that is me. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.


  • BluesMan gold member
    June 4, 2008
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    Very powerful write in so few words I enjoyed reading this Thank you for entering my contest


  • SereneAzure
    May 8, 2008
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    interesting

    this was great! I wouldn't be so sure that you won't get first