Soul Searching

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A contest entry for: Quicky Prompt - PIF - 40 words

Prompt = Tumbling, 40 words free verse.

Picture: ~ Soul Searching ~
Art Print By: Angelo Cavalli

A contest entry

• Quicky Prompt - PIF - 40 words by CarolDesjarlais. 525 points, ended May 12, 2008, 15 entries
  • next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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  CarolDesjarlais
  May 12, 2008
  
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  Great play with sound and languager... "Not's and knots
  tie up my guts
  there's rumblings
  " love it...
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  crimsondew
  May 8, 2008
  
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  Aww..so much emotion here..tumbling down with worried towards the end...well written with wonderful imagery...

  
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  pen-inhand
  May 7, 2008
  
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  Great wordplay my friend! Was a refreshing piece to read. Love the picture, blue is my favorite color! Hugs,  Kelly Best of luck

  
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  Robin Candor
  May 7, 2008
  
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  This is very inventive. Between the form of the rhymes and the word interaction you did an exceptional job. Better yet you wove the fabric of the form together and it made sense and brought different feelings to different readers. Good luck in the contest. RC

  
• JWGoethe
  May 6, 2008
  
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  I like the wordplay with the,...what's the term, oh yeah, homophones (sound the same spelled differently). Very cool.
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  Ronztrek
  May 6, 2008
  
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  Cool

  Well I'd say you did an excellent job with the prompt. I found your poem quite amusing, actually had fun with it. My favorite part has to be "Not's and Knots tie up my gut they're rumbling" Well done and good luck in the contest.
  
  Ron

  
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  DD Sai
  May 6, 2008
  
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  Catchy and romantic.

  Catchy! Love the picture also. Somehow i start to think about a speacil someone a very rare thing that happens when i read poems like this. Brillant work.