We lie in bed together at last
our legs are tangled so.
I smell your sent upon my skin.
Your stormy eyes looking in to mine with the ecstasy of love.
Time goes by fast, yet slow.
As my hand caress your face.
You kiss my cheek and notice the time.
You say you have to go!
But I shall wait again for you,
Even a few stolen moments will do.
Forever is a long time to live,
But its not long enough if I spend it with you.
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I'm not sure if this is good it just popped out of my head.
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Well put, magical
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It's a good poem. Hum I wounder what sparked the imagination. Anyway really nice.
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Atullay it is really strange I didn't do it on purpose I guess I don't feel complete unless there is at least one ryming verse in my poems so I do it subconciously. Oh well I'm strange. =)
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tisk, tisk, but any way, very good. the end ryhmes and i don't know if you did that on pupose or not. Good though.
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dose your mum know what you have been up to? lol
nice poem well done
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