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Shhhh only for you

Jesus you are beautiful
As I draw her close to me
You make me feel so wonderful
I seek eternity

Forever I could stay like this
wrapped in bare embrace
As I whisper with a kiss
so softly on your face

God I love to smell you
as I closed my eyes I felt
All the things I want to do
it made my heart melt

Oh how I love to taste you
as hungry lips explore
Every feeling that  I grew
are your's for evermore

Damn I love to feel you
skin on naked skin
I can't wait to fall into
your arms once again








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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 27, 2008

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    I will admit, I got confused a bit reading this. But when I went back and read it again, it made sense. Strong words of emotion, and what you are feeling. Nice work.

    Thank you for entering and good luck.
    Storm

  • bluecollarlove
    May 7, 2008
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    You are right.

    Definately not something I'm proud of.But the emotion of who I wrote of is real.