Excited thrill ride
floating freedom's flair.
Ease of direction
taken without a dare.
Causative plight
ignited before start.
Trysting with destiny's
grand gold heart.
Wind in the hair
what do I care?
Keep this thing going...
I must not land.
Author notes
Prompt; tumbling
A contest entry
- Quicky Prompt - PIF - 40 words by CarolDesjarlais.
525 points, ended May 12, 2008, 15 entries
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what nice rhtym to this...and the rhyme adds that lazy crazy swoop and droop to free flying.
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So much fun here..like the feel...All the best in the contest!
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Thanks, it would be nice ahhahahaah
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sure is!
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i feel your excitement here in freedom good write miss good luck x
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hahaha thanks pp, there is a mist of fine freedom exploding the airwaves lol
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aye keep flying
feel the breeze rush past while the wings of the heart and soul flap across musical life.
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Exactly, please no one punch a hole in my balloon hahahahaha
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