Today I felt your warm touch
But to find out you weren't there
I tried to kiss your soft lips
But I only kissed the air
I read the note you wrote to me
I've memorized every line
I can tell you the ending
Before my eyes scroll by
Remember the way you held my hand
And promised never to let go
We would stay together forever
When we were decreped and old
You told me you wouldn't leave me
To walk the world by myself
You told me that you loved me
Only me and no one else
So now you're gone, you felw away
Far, far away from me
Under the grass where your body lays
Growing old under that tree
I want to hold you and thoes day
Every moment I spent with you
So long my love we'll see each other again
I believe your words are true
A contest entry
- the days I spent with you..... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended May 19, 2008, 7 entries
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Comments
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I can see that you are quite emotional in the words and this is indeed a need of the love as a prompt as well perhaps..nice job..my friend....
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Sad. Couple of typos, 'decrepit', 'flew' and 'those days'. Lots of emotion though. Nice job. WAM
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