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this chateau walk

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Ma chérie, thou art raven-dark;
this chateau walk is granite-stark,
yet thou descend’st in graceful arc …
thy silken dress,
thy nightwing tress,
thy gentillesse,
from fingertip thy magicks spark!



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picture credit: http://hellbanger.deviantart.com/art/Voices-are-calling-44277973

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  • Ithica silver member
    May 18, 2008

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    OOO Witchy Woman... Nicely rendered for the pronpt pic. And congrats on the Bronze for this dark delight!!!


  • penman gold member
    May 14, 2008
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    Excellent

    Wonderful creation for the image. So very well done. Congratulations on the bronze.


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    May 14, 2008
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    I really like this, different and it works quite well.


  • quantumsurveyor
    May 8, 2008
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    Wanted to swoon into this beauty but my wife wouldn't let me! Exquisite,in a word.


  • PerVirtuous
    May 7, 2008
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    Nice.


  • CaliOkie silver member
    May 6, 2008
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    So much said in so few words. This inspires awe -- and breathlessness. Stunning.

    Garrison


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      May 6, 2008
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      Thank you, Garrison. If I don't get round to giving something of yours a read in the next couple of days, please send me a reminder. I'm rushed off my feet right now.


  • Amera gold member
    May 6, 2008

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    Beautifully woven piece of art that fits the picture perfectly. I also couldn't resist this contest because of the picture. Alow me to be the first to give it one of these:

    Love,
    Amera♥

  • Paula Pears
    May 6, 2008

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    I have read three enties for this contest now and I love them all, and they are all so different. What a great poem. Simple and short and right.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    May 6, 2008
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    Two words


    Not Bad.

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