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Sound Vixen

She's a vixen of the bass, blasting forth
Sexual sizzling sounds, supple to one's ear.
Her realm is ghastly gothical and
Eardrum-penetrating, within her vindictive
Vixen world of bass sourced seduction.

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AP: Nunchaks

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  • nos angles aigus
    November 4, 2008

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    is this ever eardrum-penetrating! really nice use of consonance and alliteration. I also like your line breaks here, it adds something extra to the piece, I find. The second line is my favourite, so tasty for the ears. haha