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Skullish revenge (Full)

Should I poison the beast upon the adjacent
And unknown view? My inner innocence is no match
For my outer hellish desire to brew revenge.
My ale is unbearable but visually sweet

As a virgin's hymen catching the man's attention,
Or should I say his wagging tail, his frail
And snake-like ornament smelling the trial,
But not the ebonized camouflage I use.

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  • nos angles aigus
    November 4, 2008

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    hahaha. I love that second stanza. Yes, sometimes it does seem that catching a man's attention means more to catch his "wagging tail". *laughs*