It's not like I just spoke with you,
Or something had to remind me,
It's not as if you just walked by,
And I haven't just seen your picture.
But you're always on my mind,
I never get a moment on my own,
Not any more,
'Cause you're always there,
For God's sake boy,
Get out of my head!
Author notes
Andrew!!! <3
Comments
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cute ^_^
the first four lines were really choppy, and had a great rhymthm, and the last four lines were really choppy and had a totally different rhythm. It seem like it should be two seperate stanzas, it just doesn't seem to fit together properly. To me, anyway, but that doesn't mean anything to anyone else. Oh god, i've confused myself.
But it's a really sweet poem though!
xxx
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