green. go.
yellow. slow.
orange. I can see you.
it's a boy. blue.
The colors talk.
Sometime screaming.
This sphere that holds the weight of breathing life,
all deaf to color, disregarding their meaning.
symbolism. wordless signs.
Can they see the writings on the wall
or read between the lines?
no need.
black. sin.
white. virgin.
The importance of the spectrum,
taken for granted.
Mood rings are being smashed
and emotions are numb.
girls using pink for their prop.
What about red... will you stop?
The colors of the rainbow must be obeyed;
maybe then Mr.Roy G Biv will not be afraid
and share with us his pot of gold.
A contest entry
- All for Fun (taking ALL poems from anyone) by Erozay.
450 points, ended May 7, 2008, 35 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - POEM NOT FOUND (404) error error error (prewrites allowed) by Alex Hex.
300 points, ended May 19, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very cute and ceative too. Loveed the reference to Rot G Biv...what a blast from the past!
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Loved it!
I am still seeing colors with words, words, words...
Thank you for the smile and blessings are sent your way...
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I like this poem. I didn't even look at the title, when I started to read this!
You have a good title. I like colors too. I think it neat how you described what each color meant. 
-Beyond Da` (Awsome) Craziness
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black. sin.
white. virgin.
pre formed ideas written into the design.
A good poem with a deeper meaning
Mood rings are being smashed
and emotions are numb.
now they are two great lines....
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Why would you solicit bad advice?
I find this interesting, on one plain. The use of colour is a vivid way to express your thoughts. However, on another plain, I find this choppy and incomplete. Perhaps I just need more to tie it together. There are just too many tangents, for my taste.
Thank you for sharing.
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whoa i love the use of color meaning symbolism...interesting, unique piece. well done!
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i like it, color does change our moods, but you forgot grey, i wrote a poem call grey it got more meanings then most colors.
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I like it but still confusing, but in a good way
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i liked that it was very creative and i havent seen any like that one yet some of the things seemed out of place though but all in all it was really good
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