what is this feeling?
i cant make it go away,
its like a state of sheer Depression
and it keeps comming my way.
every day its getting worse,
the tears they just wont stop.
why do i feel so down,
when every one els is up on top?
every thing i do,
just makes the matter worse.
why'd you have to leave me here?
you'v treated me like dirt!
the felling has finaly gone
but now its turned to hate
on the floor i watch you scream
but now its much to late.
the cuts i have you'll have them to.
its so much fun to torture you.
and watch you feel the pain ive been thru.
its not my fault. youve done this to you.
i finaly stop.
then i kick you once more.
i grab the gun off the drawer.
as you half dead watch me cock it,
put it to my head scream i still love you,
then i pop it.
now i lay down next to you in a pool of both our blood,
sorry for what i did to you.
i was just having to much fun.
just someting off the top of my head.
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OMG THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!
idk how many times i've felt like that. Wow there's just so much emotion in this piece!!!!!
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wow, really good, lots of emotion. i loved the "both of our blood" part, it gives me chills. great write!
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this is amazing u should be publushed!
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you realy liked!! thanks
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yeah i did!!! im still thinking about it lol.. thats an awesome poem that can do that =]
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wow im realy good i liked my own poem keep it up me!
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