Three little wishes,
I wish to give you,
Say your three Wishes,
Let me fetch for you;
I wish enormous wisdom,
Knowledge of the Lord's kingdom,
And grant me another wishes three;
Wish to see the path of peace,
Let the hatred on earth cease,
If you grant me three more please;
Wish you goodluck gracious genie,
May you and me be blessed by Almighty,
One more time, another wishes three;
May my name be with Abu ben Adam,
A walk in the paradise of Eden,
And a bunch of flowers of heaven;
Smiled the genie and said,
My good friend all that you said,
I grant you all but do not hasten,
Wish you joy in the world of heaven;
Dear friend a question for last time,
Why did you stop at the fourth time,
Have no wish or are you content,
I thought you'll go some more extent;
Dear genie what all I wished,
I wanted to grant what you wished,
You wished that I wish three wishes,
Thus I wished some out of all the wishes;
All I love is My Lord Most High,
I wish and seek HIM for all I wish,
Have endless wishes you asked for three,
Lord grants me seeked and unseeked and all for free.
*~*Aun Ali*~*
{Lead by Example}
Author notes
What I Wish...as three little wishes
A contest entry
- The Genie in the Lamp by nansie.
550 points, ended May 19, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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superb and ingenious
Loved the word, loved the dialogue loved the reasoning and loved all that lies behind it
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EXCELLENT POEM ALI!!
I LOVE IT!!
CONGRATULATIONS ON THE GOLD!!
WELL DESERVED!!
I'm out of applauds now so I'll come back tomorrow to applaud this wonderful poem!
EXCELLENT AND PERFECT!
Keep on writing,
Nooni
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This is soooooooo very bonita-beautiful- very lovely indeed!
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Thanks for the bonita-beautiful comment. Love ya sister...ever.
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Thats indeed a fantastic write!
Beautifully crafted...
Glad to read your poetic words after a loooooooong time!
I really hope I could get more time to hang on this site more often.....
anyways, my wishes r always with you
keep writing your best...
stay happy n healthy always...
All the best; take care...
Best Bajjo
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Dear brother,
Salaams to you. It has been such a long time from thje last time we talk. I hope everything is ok with you and your family.
Sorry bro, I didn't see your messages. Please forgive me.
By the way, I missed all your beautiful words. This poem was a remid of those good days. Thank you so much for directing me here. I wish you the happiest moments of life,
Khodahafez,
Massy
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This contains a very good message. Who needs a genie when we have God. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest
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Wow I really liked this It was unusua; and original and I really loved the language and ideas you used
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Thanks my dear sister for the comment. Your comment is like a sparkle of glitter.
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Brilliant
You have definitely got to me!!!!!
Best part being knowledge of Gods Kingdom
Love light and peace
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Ha Ha, wow what a comment. I am so glad you liked it. So I dedicate this piece to you today. Thanks my sister.
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