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Mystical dances



This mystical lady is more than she seems
She danced down the steps in my castle of dreams
Wherever she passed it was lit up by gleams
I love you my mystical lady

This mystical lady has captured my soul
She dances with me and at last I am whole
To find that she's real is my only true goal
I love you my mystical lady
 
 

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  • lynda
    September 2
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    love it

    music to the soul...for she dances to music only you can hear


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    May 14, 2008
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    Nicely done and thanks for entering.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    and we shall continue to dance, and damnit I will watch cricket... Great job loved it better by hear but what the heck... and that pics a little to dark to be me...wheres mine??

    Love ya
    Passions


  • funpum
    May 6, 2008

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    I don't know Jeff -she really doesn't look like she'd sit and watch cricket with you. Like the poem though!


    • maa gold member
      May 16, 2008
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      hahaha, I thought the same ...
      she looks more like a vampire out for a nice "bloody mary" ...
      watch out, jeff, this woman looks like trouble ...

      it's your "maa" speaking

      maa


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    May 6, 2008
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    A very mystical poem and a beautiful one as well


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    May 6, 2008
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    Charming, bro.

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