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A Poem of Feelings

You make me smile when I'm feeling my worst
You make me laugh when I'm feeling down
I always feel happy, never a worry
I feel my best when you're around

With the smallest little things, you make me laugh
Even on a bad day
And I know I can count on you to cheer me up
To keep the negative thoughts at bay

From your crooked smile, to your laugh,
To the softness of your hair
There's so much about you, that makes me so happy
Almost too happy to bear

You know that I love you more than anything
You might find it hard to believe
But believe it 'cause its truer than words
I love you, don't want you to leave

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Option Four

stargazer91/ashley prince

"A Beautiful Lie" by 30 Seconds to Mars. Video was made to be a parody of The Shining. Jarod Leto looks good in a tux. (do i get points for that??? j/k just naming off things I know. I watch the making of the video on fuse when it first came out)

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Comments

  • Ooh. I never knew that about the video. That's cool to know. The only strange part was with the guy in the bunny suit... That was just WRONG! Anyway... Nice poem. I can very much relate. Well done.
    • Actually it was a kid in a bear suit... so... yeah. That makes it even weirder, huh?
  • Very nice penning of feelings. Thanks for your entry lol