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Springs Promise

The earthen tones
of brown, tan and beige  
denotes…
the wholesome color
of Mother Nature's womb.

Swelling in anticipation
she sends the root laden sap
to the hungry limbs,
of the forest.

Heralding renewal
the promise of spring
that all barren trees

rejoice in,
as they exhale…
the long cold breath
of wintertime’s lament.

A pillar of strength
each trunk in the forest
through budding crowns
gaze at the steel gray sky
that carries…

The life giving rain
of springs promise.

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  • BookGirl
    October 3

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    In line 5, "mother natures" should be: "Mother Nature's". It was a bit choppy... but there were nice descriptions. Thanks for entering. Best wishes, BookGirl

  • sora.
    September 13
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    wonderful imagery.
    great work, & good luck.
    =]

  • james119
    August 11

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    My favorite lines:

    "Heralding renewal
    the promise of spring
    that all barren trees
    rejoice in,
    as they exhale…
    the long cold breath
    of wintertime’s lament."


    Thanks for entering
  • carole21
    May 8

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    nice

    nice descriptive write for the prompt . . very natural and enduring . . liked "the wholesome color of mother nature's womb" and "The life giving rain of Spring's promise" . . good luck in the contest . .


  • NeonRose silver member
    May 6

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    a beautiful portrayal of spring through the "darker" shades! A good read, this. Thank you for your entry!

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