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Jack the Kangaroo

Jack, the kangaroo
didn't know what to do.
His land he adored
but frankly, he was bored.

So he went for a hop,
for days he didn't stop.
Landed in Disney world
where he met a kanga girl.

Start of a budding romance,
then honeymooned in France.
Shared a plate of French Fries.
Nine months later, a little hopper arrived.

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    May 17, 2008

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    Interesting... I like the character of the kangaroo that you have developed... Good luck in the contest.

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • Sprite silver member
    May 13, 2008

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    This is so cute. Very charming and lots of fun. Can't remember reading a poem about kangaroos before. Putting these limericks together to create one poem is wonderful.

    ~ Joyce


  • vici377
    May 12, 2008

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    omg ..so cute..

    your lilting limerick style is so cute..and a perfect tribute to the land down under..thanx so much for sharing..blessings..namaste..


  • Errant Panther gold member
    May 12, 2008

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    Very amusing and quite different to what I was expecting with this opening round to the series. Perhaps jack was just chasing the tail of the qantas jet around the globe.


  • tawk gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    Wow what a wonderful Kanga Tale lol. I so enjoyed reading sis. Thanks for the smile this morning. Good luck in the contest love your sis


  • Three Doves
    May 6, 2008

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    Excellent write! Nice ending
    Best wishes in life and the contest
    Peace in light and love
    Noah


  • Olivias Violin
    May 6, 2008
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    Cute

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