He was my angel
That was sent down from heaven
He was my inspiration
That soothed my troubled soul
Only when my angel was nine-years-old
He was taken back up to heaven
His time was up
My angel is gone
My life destroyed
Years have past
I remember it like it was yesterday
He was my fallen angel
Sent from heaven
To teach me faith and courage
He was my fallen angel
I will love him always
My angel is gone
But life will somehow move on
Author notes
My name is Shannon Green, and a little boy who was
like my personal heaven, died when he was nine of cancer.
My poem is "My Angel" and my topic is lost love.
I was inspired to write this poem when I saw my lost friends photo.
I really do miss him, and I have written about four poems about him.
A contest entry
- Fallen Angels by Psychotic Moon.
400 points, ended May 6, 2008, 14 entries
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Wow. That is a powerful inspiration! Im sorry to hear that!!! Good luck!
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Touching, heartfelt, sad, beautiful, I could go on but you already know how good it is.(God Bless) -
wow this is a great write. I love the wording. It's amazing. ^^
Thank you for entering.
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This is really sad it is hard to deal with the loss of anyone I wish you love and peace always in your life much love
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Nice!!
Great poem...I am sorry to hear that he died, it is always a tragedy when a child that young loses their life. Now back to the poem - I like how there is some rhyme(I'm not sure if it was intentional), but it doesn't take over the poem..Thanks for entering and Good luck
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