Why do you insist
that love is a game?
Why do you think
they don't feel the same?
You say you love them
and all of your ex's
Then you turn around and flirt
with a girl in Texas.
You cheat and you know it
constant lies, and no fuckin trust
your girlfriends fall for it
when you are only full of lust
You think your a fuckin genius
always right and never wrong
Well i'm tired of your irritating Bullshit
So I wrote you a fuckin song
here it goes
FUCK YOU
Wasn't that a great song
Didn't you feel the flow
i just hope it wasn't too long
Cause we know that you are slow
By the way your not a genius
just to let you know the truth
I know you think your always right
but next time you tell me i'm wrong your gonna loose a fucking tooth!!!
And i am not retarded
just because i don't know every god damn thing about cars
But i swear to god you call me a dumbass agin Your gonna see the fuckin stars.
The only reason we let you in our group
is because we've known ya since junior high
But your becoming irritating and it's pissing me off
if ya don't stop.........ya just might die!!!!
Love: Jordan
Author notes
Just entering for contest.....with a little true feeling
A contest entry
- The One You Hate by Juggalo-King.
600 points, ended May 15, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Well does it creep you out? (cause if so then my job is done)
Comments
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wow!i've never heard you cuss b fore!
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ohh yeah i like this piece. good flow and i really felt the hate radiating from it
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nice nice
i like it a lot. great write
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thx
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ya, haha
well thx. I saw this contest and had to enter it. I mean it is so true that everyone has someone who just hangs around and you don't really like them but you don't wanna be a dick
. I mean can you think of anyone like this?
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hi ace. long time no talk. lol you havnt been picking on me lol. its not the same on ap if your not picking on me and trying to steal my wings and stuff. hit me up sometime.
butterfly
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please don't tell me it's brad. i'll laugh myself out of my chair.
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holy cow!!!!!!
Loved it. way to go Jordan. I never new you felt that way. Oh ummmm who were you talking about anyway?
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wow
that was one of the best ones uve written n my opinion the flow was great the words the rhyme and everthin was great some of the loines ran a little long but thats otay it was great still if u dont place or better yet win this contest the judge is an idiot great write dude
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Reminds me of someone on Ap too.....
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its good
and strangely
reminds me
of brad
lol
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HAhahahahaha
Man i loved it that was some funny ass shit and yes he pisses me off to...but ya good luck
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