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why don't you ever go away

you sit by me
your there when I'm bored
but please stay away
please leave me alone

your voice it annoys
your attitude is so pathetic
buddy
you're not cool

you're not fun
deal with it
I hate ths time we spend together
but I can't be mean

second though
tick tock
yes
I can be mean

I yell
I curse
you never leave
why must you linger here?

go away pathetic excuse
you bother even in my sleep

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  • BlackSwan
    May 6, 2008
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    ???


    • exithere
      May 7, 2008
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      i wrote it for the contest. it has nothing to do with the situation with the guys. i kinda used him as inspiration but not really


  • LunaAmara
    May 6, 2008
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    well...i wonder who that's about.


  • Juggalo-King
    May 6, 2008
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    OK

    Its not bad but it could of been better but good luck