phsycoanalyze me for a minute
listen to these worries
then mess with my head
you always manage to get so deep
deeper than anyone else
you itch at my skin
you crawl in my head
shh...you might wake me
I might realize what your doing
oh but baby don't stop
the fun's just begining
I can do it too
I can get in your head
this is perfect isn't it
blissful perfection
carnal desires begining to take over...
uh oh
what you gonna do now?
you gonna run away?
you know you want me
don't bother with protection
I know you too well
your defences are futile
this perfection
so unhealthy
so bad to feel so good
time to say goodbye baby
time to say goodbye
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Hmmm... I feel this is a little rough on the edges. The grammar is wrong in some places, and I don't really feel that the rhetorical questions/sarcasm works much. The ending was pretty good, though I thought the "baby" thing was a little cliche. Thank you for entering, and good luck
Jeanette*~
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