The biggest feelings
Compressed, enclosed
Into small concepts
And with thin sharpness
Flying around the abstractions
Treasuring them like stardust
Understanding beyond limits
Without discrimination
But loving
Author notes
Lavender Butterfly, my AP mom, is my prompt. I'm sorry I couldn't give any better, and also sorry if the title or the poem sound awkward. I just tried to give my best, but I wonder if it's enough.
A contest entry
- May 27th by Lavender Butterfly.
781 points, ended May 26, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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This is so beautifully profound. Thanks so very very much... x
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