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standing in the way

my happily ever after
is not here yet

waiting on the steps of eternity
with my back to your window

 

how will i ever know

when you are ready

 

if i never look 

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    May 14, 2008
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    I like how the first line leads into everything, a nicely written piece.