Embraced within womb
of mother earth
Careless ways exposed
Curled in penance...
Pleading conscience
be cleared,
of mankind's ruinous ways
Author notes
Prompt: Pic, 20 words
Image credit:
http://chelloveck.deviantart.com/art/Hurt-41122217
In a list
A contest entry
- Morning Quickie PIF 9-20-20 by markgrif.
525 points, ended May 6, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Golden cup for a golden piece of poetry. This one shines with creativity and metaphor. Magnificently penned as always!!
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Awesome!!!
Congratulations on the golden chalice!!!
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You are amazing and this piece shows it once more...how wonderfully deep and creative...wonderful word use and meaning...a true master piece once again, no wonder your muse gets tired...lol
Congrat's on a well written Gold!
Love,
sis
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Ruinous is a word? Well, you obviously have quite a vocabulary...
You use the word 'exposed' in a classy way that doesn't allude to nudity at all (but could, but it doesn't seem like it does).
My favorite line? Hard to say, but I liked "Careless ways exposed".
Kudos on the Gold--those are always pretty to win!! =]
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lol.. yep it's a word hehe
Thanks!!
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Congratulations on the Gold! This is such an amazing write! You have really brought the poem to life! Fantastic!
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Once again amazing write. You are so wonderful at making every word really count. I love the imagery and metaphore
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Wow
Absolutely wonderful..love the take on the picture..so deep and profound.....Congrats on the gold...so well deserved!
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Pure GOLD!!!
congrats!
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this is really good mum
i love you
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A big congratulations Jackie!!!
This is absloutely brillaint!
Beautifully penned from the prompt!!
Linda
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very powerful piece hun. absopositively deserved the gold trophy. captured the pic prompt beautifully
congrats
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Good Gold trophy winner! Bravo!
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Congrats!
On this very well earned shiny. Great job You deserve it!
~Ron~
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Congrats Sis!!! You RULE!!!
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Wonderful write to the prompt...captured it brilliantly....and a shiny gold too..
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wow
this was really good...i think you captured the picture well....too good
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hooly bloody hell..i can see why ur the only once thus far in the finalist list
gees sis wow powerful...why did I bother lol..I joke
I bet this is going to be gold...and well pls gold for once dont let me miss out on the pif you create to pif it hahahhaha
good luck
Love you , a brilliant take..
CIn
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I shall wait till I see you on sis!
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Fantastic Write!
Best wishes in life and the contest
Peace in light and love
Noah
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Well done my Twin
Wonderful as always
Simon
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impressive
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You nailed this pic entirely! This is awesome as ever hunni Good luck!
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A strong write. Don't cry
you are a true inspiration. Keep penning your beautiful words dear lady.
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oooh.. dark but theres some light there too!! I like it.. you did a wonderful job sis!! best of luck!!
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