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Moon Light and Star Shine

Soft breeze,
    stirring memories
        of contented sighs
as I drift
    along the warm
                drafts-

Moon light
  and star shine
  illuminating your 
        lovely
          smiling
                soul-

Author notes

using the prompt
"gazing the stars 'neath a moonlit sky"

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 7, 2008
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    Yep, this works for the prompt. Soft and tender. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm


    • greyhaime
      May 7, 2008
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      thanks so much for the HM,, !
      that rocks..
      good contest and I really liked the promt.
      thanks


  • BluRosePoet8488
    May 6, 2008

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    Yes, very beautiful. Very beautifully written. I love it! Keep the ink flowing and good luck! Love and hugs...
    ~Donna~


  • LionessK silver member
    May 6, 2008

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    bella, mia tesoro.

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