Soft breeze,
stirring memories
of contented sighs
as I drift
along the warm
drafts-
Moon light
and star shine
illuminating your
lovely
smiling
soul-
Author notes
using the prompt
"gazing the stars 'neath a moonlit sky"
In a list
A contest entry
- Cherished Quickie - PIF by StormGoddess.
425 points, ended May 7, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Yep, this works for the prompt. Soft and tender. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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thanks so much for the HM,, !
that rocks..
good contest and I really liked the promt.
thanks
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Yes, very beautiful. Very beautifully written. I love it! Keep the ink flowing and good luck! Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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thanks Donna,
I liked how this one came out,
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bella, mia tesoro.
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thank you sweetness..
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