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I am special

They say that I am worth nothing at all.
They say that I am a cold, bitter person who doesn't understand things in life.
I want them to see that I am not just a pretty face, that I am
worthy of attention and kindness.
That I am special and that
anyone should be happy with me in their lives.
Because I know I'm good for something
I just haven't found it yet
But I need it
I need to know that people think that I am special,
that I am not some big disgrace that should be hidden.
I want them to know that I don't think that they are inferior to me.
I need someone to see that I do love things,
all things in this world.
I just don't love the wrong things in life,
I love the beautiful things,
as well as the ugly things of life.
I am special just being me,
because I love people and things
too much to see them die.

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  • LivInThisObsession
    June 10, 2008

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    aww this was so inspirational! you did a really great job!!! i really loved the entire thing but i'd have to say my fav part was "because i know im good for something, i just haven't found it yet."


  • Rockerstar
    June 10, 2008

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    That was moving and inspirational. :-) My fav lines were "I love people and things too much to see them die." and "Because I know I'm good for something I just haven't found it yet". That's how I feel at the moment- a work in progress.


  • inhisimage
    May 20, 2008

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    wow i really like this. These emotions are meotions I think we cna alot relate to. Thanx for sharing

  • poetrytoopeneyes
    May 6, 2008

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    The last line in this is very strong. You incorporated the quote nicely into the poem. I hope people do start to see you for who you are. Good write!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 6, 2008

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    Aww.. such a pleading to be seen as more than what's on the outside and loved for what's on the inside! I know that feeling hun...

    This was a beautiful piece of your heart out here...

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