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Jewelled Infinity

With generosity beyond compare,
Celestial jewels are scattered abroad,
Diamonds dust the ebony depths,
Fain am I their wealth to hoard.
Absorbing iridescent infinity.

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I love to just wander amidst the stars in my imagination while watching them and at peace.

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  • paullallady silver member
    July 16, 2008

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    This has such powerful imagery, your word choices
    were perfect to enhance the depth of this poem.
    My favorite line was:
    "Diamonds dust the ebony depths"

    what wonderful imagery this is! I loved this and enjoyed reading it. great job on this poem.


  • MYsecondchance
    May 7, 2008

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    this is awesome with the image on the stars at the top it really paints a good picture of the sky in my head
    really a good write


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 7, 2008
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    Very nice...sparkling. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest. Storm