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Birth of beauty





With windswept palms
  she is kissed
  like twilight
  dozing on butterflies wing
    canvased in lavender
 
  ~mystique~

born again
  in hazy dreams
  she smiles
    innocently

    ~another wish~








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  • Lavender Butterfly gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    How divinely precious ~ I am touched by this one... x Thanks so much.

  • TwiztidMaggot
    May 21, 2008

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    This is a very good peice. I really thought this was beautiful. Best of luck in the contest. Keep up your amazing work!

    CrimsonViper

  • notorious
    May 11, 2008

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    Love the "windswept palms" and the ending, "another wish", which PERFECTLY coincides with the birthday aspect...nicely done here.

    However, 'canvased' is not a word (search it on dictionary.com/, it's not there).