Flurry of Dancing Flames,
It has been so long since I've last seen you
Those emerald green eyes
Your fire red hair
Are naught but distant memories
There are times when I can hear your voice
A whisper, floating on the wind
[got it memorized]
How I wish to see you
At night, I think of the last time we talked
The cold words I said to you
Tear me up inside
And I hope you can forgive me
Please know that I will never forget you
One day I'll come back
And we will be together again
I just hope that you'll be waiting for me
I miss you more and more each day
Maybe we can meet up
In the next life
Until we meet again
Goodbye
From your,
Key of Destiny
Author notes
I was playing Kingdom Hearts and just suddenly came up with this.
I've written more of these. Here are the link's to the others:
(2) Sora and Kairi
(3) Demyx and Zexion
(4) Zexion and Marluxia
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sweet
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My, this is quite the "letter" poem. I do SO like it! This is nicely done... as far as I can tell right now. ^_^
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Cute
I love it.
And I love you.
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Aw love you 2 Thanks
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NOOOO...
I can't accept this...
Roxas,,is mine...T-T
anyway, I really love this too...
I feel Roxas's regrets...
My poor sweety Roxy...
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I love this one... I nearly cried once when I read it!! But shhh... Don't tell anyone XD hehe thanks
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Hmmm....
A love letter to me? Very very interesting.
It feels so strongly of passion, And I enjoy that. Very well written.
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Hehe, I love your pic and thank you
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Very well done. Not really sure what to write lol.. Um, but yeah. I love the imagination you've put towards this piece. It was put together very well. Keep it up!
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It needs just a bit more improvment... I have noticed its named "unfinished" lol but yeah, keep on it. Great job so far.
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lol i've completely changned the poem cuz i never finished the other one. i wrote this one last nite
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