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Beneath the night

I could sign my name
across your ivory flesh
with the calligraphy of my poetic soul

and our lips
will paint the world
in silent moments of each other

as we unite
in the softest shades ~
                                        drawn

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Prompt : Shivering Sensuality

Lavender Butterfly

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  • spiritualangel
    May 21, 2008

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    could sign my name
    across your ivory flesh
    with the calligraphy of my poetic soul

    Sensuous. Good luck


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 8, 2008

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    Such soft sensuality that whispers love and desire! Beautiful


  • Weltt
    May 6, 2008
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    Beautiful!!! I love this one from you. A winner in my opinion. Best of luck in the contest


  • Unsigned gold member
    May 6, 2008
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    Wonderful write Donna...very sensual and lots of longing.

    Me!