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Butterfly Birthday

Butterfly dust drifts through my mind
with beautifully unique poetry entwined

Lavender encouragements in strong supply
My words inspired by a friend nearby
Happy Birthday Mrs. Butterfly!




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Dedication to Lavender Butterfly

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 26, 2008
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    This is just beautiful ~ Thank you so very much... x


  • notorious gold member
    May 11, 2008

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    Great rhyme in the first 2 lines (and I don't even like rhyme).

    Truly sincere in its well-wishing and quite a fitting title as well. Nicely done here.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 9, 2008

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    Aww that is lovely!! What a beautiful dedication.. all truth too!