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~ Butterfly Day~





Murmuring here writing
a birthday wish to you,
playing with heartstrings,
oh, so sweetly, so true,
thoughts can't get out of
mind, in depth, what to do.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

~spiritualangel

*HAPPY BIRTHDAY*

Prompt: 27th May

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 26, 2008
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    Sincerely divine. Thanks so very much... x


  • notorious gold member
    May 8, 2008

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    How sincere!!

    Some of the most subtle rhyming I've seen in a while (e.g. you, do, true) It's not overdone or contrived, so well done.

    "Butterfly day"-What a clever change from 'Birthday'...Kudos to you!!